Here’s eight sentences from Cupid in Camo, a Valentine’s short story, for Weekend Writing Warriors 8 sentence Sunday in the romance category. Lindy’s lawyer fiancé is working late on Valentines and she greets him with a surprise. Not finding him in his office, she checks the conference room.
Occasionally, he laid out his briefs on the conference room table. Setting her camera phone to record, she rounded the corner for the meeting room and burst through the door. “Happy Valentines Day, baby!” The colorful array of Mylar whirled in ahead of her dancing, festively.
A feminine screech set Lindy back on her heels. As her field of vision cleared, she spied Brad’s briefs spread on the table alright, right next to his tighty whities, a pink, lacy bra and and matching panties… Like a Master Card commercial, his expression was priceless.
“Well, isn’t this a YouTube moment,” Lindy snarled, squinting with her phone still in video mode while the woman scampered behind the enormous table like a frightened deer.
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Dani Jace. Romance Author 
What a tease! I’m dying to know how this turns out. Great snippet!
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Thanks Lashell!
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Heartbreaking scene for her yet you tell it using humor to cover her feelings. Well done, Dani.
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Thanks Charmaine!
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Nice and descriptive. And, hilarious. Loved it.
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Glad you got a laugh! 🙂
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This certainly pulls a reaction out of the readers! So visual, Dani. And I feel so bad for her –in just 8 sentences. Nicely done! 🙂
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I always writer HEA! She’ll get the better end 🙂
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Oh dear, I had a feeling last week maybe surprising this guy wasn’t a good idea, but at least now she knows what he’s really like. Excellent snippet!
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You got me cringing. I can’t wait to find out what happens next. Hopefully satisfying revenge.Thank you for posting.
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