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Chicago Fire meets Baywatch: A Hot as Blazes Review

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This week’s question for the Romance Writers Weekly blog hop is from Kathryn Renard who is ahead of me on this week’s hop “Good reviews, we love them! Bad reviews, we hate them…but some of them are helpful. What was your favorite negative review?”

As for reviews, I usually scan the star ratings for a feel on how the book is doing before delving into comments.  It’s so hard to get reviews on Amazon, especially for newer authors, like me, who don’t have a large reader base. It takes 50 reviews before Amazon promotes a book and includes it in the scrolling feed, Customers Who Bought This Item also Bought.  You can love an author by leaving a review!

Of the couple one star reviews I’ve received, one reader hated my novella, White Doe, and ‘absolutely could not read another page,’ but gave no reason.

The worst review on my recently released SEAL story, Sand and Sin, Sand and Sinwas on Goodreads and the reader despised the cocky hero and thought he was using the single mom. Well…most SEALs are cocky and my heroine totally knew the conflicts of having a fling with a West Coast frogman when she lived in Virginia Beach. It had a HEA (happy ever after) so maybe the story triggered something in the reader’s past.

Now, for my favorite negative: “Baywatch meets Chicago Fire” by The Book Reading Gals on Amazon. Below the picture is a legible version.

Baywatch review

 

Hot as Blazes_cover_New_series“Thoughts: This is typically a book I would love…we have the guy crushing on the girl for years, the girl secretly loves the guy – not to mention hot firefighters! However, there was a bit of a lack of connection for me with this one…I just didn’t feel the emotions between the characters, and that is a big part of the book for me. In addition to that, I had an issue with the maturity level of the characters. For some reason, this one had a little bit of a New Adult vibe to it, and I just couldn’t shake that feeling the whole time I was reading it. I can’t really pinpoint anything in the book that substantiates my feeling regarding that, but just the writing itself sort of read that way and gave me that impression.

When it comes to this title, think Chicago Fire meets Baywatch and that about sums it up. A decent read overall.”

My thoughts: No other reviewer,  my critique group, or beta reader ever said Hot as Blazes read like New Adult story. It’s also four peppers on the heat scale!

On the bright side, I loved their blurb ‘think Chicago Fire meets Baywatch’ and have used it in promo on social media, even though it was probably meant as a slam.

Pirates-683x1024Now on to the witty, S. C. Mitchell,  to see what he as to say about his most negative review. Check out his new book, Pirates of the Dark Nebula.

Hot as Blazes for Weekend Writing Warriors #werwriwa

WWWWelcome to my post for Weekend Writing Warriors. This week I’m highlighting ten sentences from my opening scene of Hot as Blazes.  A down and out surfer returns home and runs into her crush from high school. He happens to be her brother’s best friend.

Outside, the shower door slammed and Jo secured her sunglasses heading down the deck stairs. Broad back muscles stretched the Nags Head fire department logo on the man’s shirt as he racked his surfboard.

Behind a pair of wraparound shades, he eyed her and said, “Bobby’s gone for the weekend.”

Her dad had been a captain for Nags Head. “Yeah, I know, how were the waves?”

His smile seemed familiar as he whipped off his shades and closed the distance, shouting, “Jo!”

“Ray?” She nearly toppled from her platform flip-flops as huge biceps wrapped her in a bear hug that left her toes dangling and his touch shot through her veins like straight whiskey.

“Bobby didn’t mention you were coming home, Dahlin’.” His pale blue eyes held her captive and his southern twang brought her home faster than a jet from LAX.

Speak tags and some creative punctuation used to get this in ten. Hope you’ll check out the fantastic authors on the #wewriwa hop! Thanks for stopping by.  For more of Hot as Blazes, check the excerpt.