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Romance Weekly – Sept 2

RomanceWeeklyThis week’s questions are from Ronnie Allen. Hope you’ve already visited with Veronica Forand

When do you decide that you’ve done enough editing and changes??????????????????????????????? would now be making it different, not better? So it’s the time to submit.

Being in a critique group helps. Most of the last novel I finished had been critiqued by the group and then I asked my PRO mentor to go through it again. Now I’m letting it sit while I finish a novella. Being away from the book for a few weeks will help me see the story with fresh eyes and then I’ll run through one more time before submitting.

When and how do you accept change advice by rejection letters and critique partners?

Rejections from publishers are hard to decipher even if they give you a reason, as most site generalities like – It wasn’t engaging. This can mean many things. It wasn’t until joining a critique group and having a multi-published author line edit me did I really understand my writing issues. Hopefully, I’ve corrected most of them. I’ll see soon enough when my first edits return from my Lyrical editor.

When you’re not writing, how do you spend your day or do you create your day around your writing?

I work full time and write during evenings and weekends. My husband and I are more or less homebodies so it works out. Writing is a large part of my life, but it doesn’t stop me from engaging in real life. Writing supplements the mundane day to day. Getting into a story I’m writing is more exciting than anything I could be watching on TV.

Veronica Forand has a new release in October with Susan Scott Shelly titled, Tackled by the Girl Next Door.  It’s TackledbytheGirl_w8968_750-2-200x300about a football player and I can’t wait!!!

Meggan Connors is published in multi romance genres and is next on the hop.

Game On! To play or Not to Play #8Sunday

Game On! is my short story I’m serving up on Weekend Writing Warriors for #8Sunday. In this week’s eight, Jordan and Heath, who met recently, are having brunch in a small cafe. She’s just proposed a sexual game.“One part at a time, Mr. Lancaster,” she teased, “I don’t think either one of us is looking for a relationship.”

“So how is this non-relationship, body part at a time supposed to work?” he asked studying her.

She reached across the table and enveloped his calloused hand with strong, cool fingers. A woman of determination.

What is she up to? He tilted his head in confusion; however, his body urged him to hear her out.

“The first time we met we held hands.”

“And this time?” he asked. Surely she wouldn’t follow through on the game she was proposing.

 

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Hope you’ve enjoyed today’s 8 for Game On! For more fun check out other Weekend Writing Warriors‘ blogs.

If you enjoyed the previous snippets from White Doe it is 99c at Amazon.

5 Stars
on November 29, 2013

Format: Kindle Edition Verified Purchase

Fantastic storyline, sensuous, bold, and captivating are only a few of the words to describe this book!!! I would have kept on reading no matter how long it took to read, but wished it had not ended so soon. I would love to read any sequels with the characters in it. I can not wait to read more from this author. I love a mix of love, sensuality, and paranormal!!