Game on! is my new short story I’m serving up on Weekend Writers Warriors #8Sunday. Please see the link below and check out many talented authors’ snippets.
Teammates of the area’s new pro football team, Heath and Dugan, are kicking back on a beach near their rental house after practice when they spy two hot girls. Dugan throws a pass off the mark to gain the ladies attention. While Heath apologizes and picks up their spelt brews, his buddy offers them some of theirs.
“Not a problem, ladies.” The passer motioned to his beach chair.
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But of course, her model looking friend was always first pick. Jordan handed the ball over to the intended receiver, giving him the once over.
Whooa! More to her tastes anyway. Tall, sandy-blonde with muscular shoulders that v’d into a six-pack. The stripe on his board shorts accentuated his well-carved butt.
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“Heath,” he offered, extending his hand.
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“Miller?” She joked, comparing him a well known NFL tight-end. Almost the same height and just as muscular. A definite hard-body. He might have been threatening looking if not for those endearing dimples and genuine smile.
Hope you’ve enjoyed today’s eight for Game On! For more furn check out other Weekend Writing Warriors‘ blogs.
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Good snippet. Loved the description of Heath. And I LOVED the “Miller” in response! (Steelers fan here).
Putting on moderator’s cap: Your sentences climbed well over 8, and I see that it was to keep from cutting off a scene in the middle. Still, try to keep it limited to 8–to keep it fair for everyone. 🙂
Have a great Sunday, Dani. 🙂
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Sorry about going over. Yep, Steelers fan here too!
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Fun meet, will be interesting to see where this leads…
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Thanks! Appreciate you stopping by and commenting.
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That was a fun scene for sure. Big NFL fan here! Can’t wait to read more of this story. Great snippet!
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Thanks! Have fun at RT!
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Very nice description and smoothly written. Great snippet!
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Thanks for stopping by!
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